"...memos that conflict with the narrative Democrats..."
I call this "lazy" writing because there's a word missing. As it stands, it potentially stalls the reader. For a moment, it had me wondering "what's a narrative Democrat?" until my eyes moved to the next line to discover "...have sustained...".
"...memos that conflict with the narrative Democrats..."
I call this "lazy" writing because there's a word missing. As it stands, it potentially stalls the reader. For a moment, it had me wondering "what's a narrative Democrat?" until my eyes moved to the next line to discover "...have sustained...".
Ideally, it should read: "...memos that conflict with the narrative, which Democrats have sustained".
"...memos that conflict with the narrative Democrats..."
I call this "lazy" writing because there's a word missing. As it stands, it potentially stalls the reader. For a moment, it had me wondering "what's a narrative Democrat?" until my eyes moved to the next line to discover "...have sustained...".
Ideally, it should read: "...memos that conflict with the narrative, which Democrats have sustained".
I hope this helps.
I agree as I found an useless word in an "Our take" !
But it's not the same ...😃😃